School is for the growth of a young person’s ability to understand. It’s a fancy way of saying that school is for learning. While the original phrase is good-natured, one simple change turns it into the most truthful definition of school possible: school is for growth. Academic growth is certainly achievable during the school day but so is social, cultural, societal, and personal growth. Without recognizing every kind of growth a teen experiences, the definition of high school can never be fully accurate. An average school day in 2023 presents a teenager with many opportunities for growth.
In 2020 the world went on pause. The growth normally experienced inside the school building was disrupted. Teenagers enjoyed it at first, an extra long spring break was a dream. Then it turned into summer and school never went back in session that academic year. No responsibility and a lot of free time seems very liberating for a teen but in a climate where they couldn’t leave their house, it was suffocating. The social and cultural growth normally achieved at school was done digitally, leaving this generation of teens extra reliant on their cell phones. Upon returning to the physical classroom, the digital dependency did not disappear.
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When going back to school in the fall of 2020, every cough was a threat, every person missing from class was an enemy, and every negative test result was a sigh of relief. The already stressful school life coupled with the worry of getting COVID-19 turned high school into a minefield of nerves. One wrong step and the stress could blow up in the face of an unsuspecting teen just trying to get by. Having become so dependent on technology, students clung to their phones like a life-line. Although they were able to be in the classroom it was uncertain how much the students were actually learning with a screen in front of their face during instruction. Many students did not learn how to responsibly use a phone inside the classroom due to the pandemic and the leniency that most teachers had when returning to the building. It was a difficult time for teens and teachers alike but the growth in responsibility was less likely to happen because students were less likely to get in trouble for having their phone out or turning in an assignment three weeks late.
The pandemic severely hindered teens’ opportunities of growth and the repercussions are still being felt in classes today. Students are more distracted than ever but there will always be room to grow.
The imagery and word choice in this essay is very good and helps bring the point and essay together. I like the focus on what school was like during covid and not just how school has been affected after the fact. Tying in the importance of growth in the beginning and comparing it to the severing of growth due to covid is brilliant.
The metaphors used in the third paragraph are very helpful in creating imagery for the reader and emphasizing these aspects of school during covid. My question would be what was your personal experience? You showed what it was like for most students but not as much about yourself, my suggestion would be to put yourself in the narrative more.
I love this post, Sophia!! I think the way you word everything is so artful and deliberate. YOUR BLOG IS ON FIRE! One question I have is how do you personally relate to this? Along with that, one area I think you could polish is making sure to show and not tell in some areas. OTHER THAN THAT, GREAT JOB!
Your set up is very good for this essay. The metaphors used build off your idea and help me to better understand the aspects of school during/after the pandemic you spoke about in the essay. I think that a way you could improve this is to insert a small snippet of your personal experience during this time.